Saturday, 16 May 2009

S-H-A-T-T-E-R-E-D



The wind whispers...
dives through the shattering branches
rising, breaking the silence ….

I hear his voice...
echoes in the vast wilderness
begging, asking for forgiveness…

The door opens...
footsteps come out slowly
moving, losing dominion and security...

I see her face...
she weeps, scarred with deceit and pain
hurting, bidding farewell to him...


7 comments:

Lord CM said...

Wow!!!Nice!!!Gawa mo pre?

bampiraako said...

opo.. isa sa mga epekto ng tag-ulan. haha.

Badong said...

naiingit talaga ako sa mga taong magaling magsulat ng tula. nice poem!

Andy Briones said...

Emo mode ka nanaman.... Beer lang ang katapat niyan at eat-all-you-can buffet ng Something Fishy, ehehe.

<*period*> said...

GALING AMAN

wanderingcommuter said...

love the word play!!!

subtle pero hits hard!

The Pope said...

Mahusay ka talanga gumawa ng ganitong tema ng poems - intelligent and perceptive.

Purihin ka kaibigan.