The wind whispers...
dives through the shattering branches
rising, breaking the silence ….
dives through the shattering branches
rising, breaking the silence ….
I hear his voice...
echoes in the vast wilderness
begging, asking for forgiveness…
echoes in the vast wilderness
begging, asking for forgiveness…
The door opens...
footsteps come out slowly
moving, losing dominion and security...
I see her face...
she weeps, scarred with deceit and pain
hurting, bidding farewell to him...
she weeps, scarred with deceit and pain
hurting, bidding farewell to him...
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7 comments:
Wow!!!Nice!!!Gawa mo pre?
opo.. isa sa mga epekto ng tag-ulan. haha.
naiingit talaga ako sa mga taong magaling magsulat ng tula. nice poem!
Emo mode ka nanaman.... Beer lang ang katapat niyan at eat-all-you-can buffet ng Something Fishy, ehehe.
GALING AMAN
love the word play!!!
subtle pero hits hard!
Mahusay ka talanga gumawa ng ganitong tema ng poems - intelligent and perceptive.
Purihin ka kaibigan.
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